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Exam Tip

When writing essays, a common mistake students make is not planning enough. Spend a few minutes brainstorming ideas, e.g. using a benefits / disadvantages table or a mind map, before writing. You can then focus on language issues.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

In today’s cosmopolitan world it is unusual to find a major city or country where there are no immigrants. People travel more now than they ever did in the past and populations have had to adapt to this transitional lifestyle much more quickly than in the past. Ultimately society, as a group of individuals, directs the way that new arrivals in a country are treated. But the government can do a number of things to support this.

Firstly, all governments should insist that schools teach history and culture from more than one country, not just the home nation. By learning how others have lived we gain insight into alternative cultures and ways of life which makes us more accepting when we meet people from those countries. Of course, we don’t have time to learn about the history of every country in the world but understanding at least one other culture opens our minds and makes us more tolerant.

In addition, when immigrants choose to settle in a country, the host government should offer free language and culture lessons. It is impossible for new arrivals to integrate if they do not understand the language and habits of their new home. I believe it is important for immigrants to learn the culture of the place they have chosen to settle. By acquiring the language and knowledge about the culture, they will be able to integrate more easily and comfortably without necessarily losing their own identity.

Finally, the governments of countries should make sure that they have some stringent laws to protect people from aggression or prejudice so that, should an immigrant face terrible attitudes, they have some protection. By ensuring people feel safe the host country shows that it is civilized and promotes integration.

In summary, understanding others is the key to harmonious living but laws should also be in place to protect people from those who can’t behave responsibly.

(317 words)

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Essay#48 | Global Warming https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/global-warming/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/global-warming/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/?p=7429 Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?

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Exam Tip

Task 2 in the IELTS exam asks a question about a social topic such as the environment, education or the media. You must answer this question by giving your opinions, along with reasons and examples, in an essay. You must write at least 250 words and you should spend about 40 minutes writing the essay.

It is important to use a standard essay structure consisting of separate paragraphs: an introduction (one paragraph), followed by the main body of the essay (two or three paragraphs), and then a conclusion (one paragraph).

The introduction to a Task 2 essay can describe the topic of the essay, give background information to it and list various opinions about it. You should also briefly state your own view, which you then go on to explain and support in the main body of the essay.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

Global warming has long been recognized as a serious problem by most climate scientists. Governments around the world have begun to take the necessary measures to address it. However, as our understanding of the scale and nature of the problem is still developing, efforts to tackle global warming need to be reassessed from time to time.

Recent evidence suggests that some risk factors associated with climate change may have been overstated. Sea levels are now expected to rise by approximately one metre, not two metres, as previously thought. This is because some glaciers and ice sheets appear to be contracting, the Arctic, for example, while others, such as the Antarctic, appear to be expanding. Also, it is now thought that the Gulf Stream is unlikely to vanish. It may, therefore, be possible to scale back plans for flood defences in coastal areas.

However, there is also evidence that some of the consequences of climate change may have been understated. Tropical forests are now believed to be more vulnerable to drought. Hurricanes and typhoons may become more severe. Greater efforts should therefore be made to protect vulnerable populations, especially in tropical areas. Buildings in storm-prone areas may also need to be re-designed to withstand high winds.

These recommendations, however, address the symptoms of global warming, not the root cause: the generation of greenhouse gases. Whatever the precise scale and nature of the consequences of global warming, they are all undesirable. Clearly, more needs to be done to reduce the burning of fossil fuels. Stricter emissions targets should be set and the use of alternative sources of energy encouraged. It would be profoundly irresponsible to do nothing about the causes of global warming.

(280 words)

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Essay#46 | Violence https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/violence/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/violence/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/?p=7399 Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment.

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IELTS Writing Tip

In IELTS Writing Task 2 questions, when you write the main body of your essay, you need to explain your ideas fully. Examiners are looking to see how you develop your topic sentences, and will give you a better score if you do it well.

At the end of any type of essay in the IELTS exam, you need to write a short conclusion. The important thing to remember is there are no right or wrong conclusions, and the examiner will not make any judgements about your opinions, so write freely and clearly.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many people believe that increasing levels of violence on television and in films is having a direct result on levels of violence in society. Others claim that violence in society is the result of more fundamental social problems such as unemployment.

How much do you think society is affected by violence in the media?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

There are different views on the causes of violence in the world today. Some argue that it is connected to people’s exposure to violent scenes on television and in films, whilst others point to wider problems in society such as unemployment, poor housing and education as the root of anti-social behaviour. It is my belief that violence in the media plays a significant role in encouraging violent behaviour.

A first point is that as levels of violence in the media increase, so does young people’s exposure to it. Even films aimed at children often contain violence and despite the difficulty of proving whether this directly affects society, it is hard not to be concerned. After all, children learn through modelling adult behaviour, so if the models they choose are violent then it is highly likely that they may be violent themselves.

Furthermore, the way violence is portrayed in the media is often stylized resulting in violence being seen as attractive. People who are easily impressed may then behave violently themselves. Although research has shown that aggressive behaviour is actually often the result of having aggressive parents, I still believe that the unrealistic way violence is shown in the media must have a negative result on society.

Finally, the media has become increasingly globalized which means that violence in programmes or films can be viewed all over the world. I would argue that the increasing quantity and level of violence seen around the world must be a negative force in society.

In conclusion, although it is difficult to prove beyond a doubt the effect of violence in the media on society, I believe that the result on the young, the unrealistic way it is shown and the global nature of media communications all have a significant and negative impact on society.

(300 words)

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Essay#14 | Advances in Science and Technology https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/advances-in-science-and-technology/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/advances-in-science-and-technology/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/?p=6329 Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now.

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Linking expressions

In Task 2 of the Academic Writing exam, you need to support the opinion you express by providing examples. You can use these phrases:

to introduce an example

  • for example
  • for instance
  • including
  • for one thing
  • another example of this is
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

The last hundred years have seen rapid and dramatic developments in many areas, including medicine, transport, manufacturing and communications. Over that period our lives have changed in ways that our parents and grandparents could only have dreamed of, but the question we should ask is whether the world is a better place to live in as a result.

There have clearly been many benefits. Advances in medical science have brought cures for once fatal diseases and this has significantly extended the lifespan we can expect. Information technology has allowed us to contact friends or colleagues worldwide at the click of a mouse. We can now gather information, manage our bank account or shop without having to step outside our home. In addition, labour-saving devices such as washing machines and microwave ovens have made everyday tasks much easier.

However, the fact that life has improved in so many ways doesn’t mean that all the developments have been positive. For example, the emphasis on acquiring the latest technology has made people increasingly materialistic. We also tend to lead more isolated lives than our parents did, with less concern for other people. The resulting breakdown of traditional social ties can leave the elderly and other vulnerable people without the support they need. Among other serious problems we face are the drug culture, and the ever-present threat of terrorism.

To sum up, we have made great progress over the last hundred years but there are still many important issues to tackle. This may well be a better time to live than any previous age but hopefully, the future will be better still.

(268 words)

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Essay#13 | A dream job https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/a-dream-job/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/a-dream-job/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/?p=6327 The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.

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IELTS Writing Tips
  • You only have a few minutes to plan your answer. You need to get used to writing short notes. As far as possible, write just one word to remind you of each idea you have. This way you maximize your thinking and planning time.
  • You need some variety of ideas. An answer based on only one or two ideas is likely to be weak.
  • You may not have very many ideas, but 250 words is not a long essay.
  • You need to choose your best arguments and drop the weaker ones.
  • Make your points stronger by giving examples to support them.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

It is widely accepted that, for most people, their daily working lives will not be spent in their dream jobs. Despite this, I do not feel that people should instead prioritise becoming a high earner above all other concerns.

To begin with, I strongly believe that people need stimulation in their daily working lives in order to feel a sense of reward. Very few of us can go through an entire career staying in a position or an industry that we find boring purely for the financial incentive. Secondly, there are so many people who see their working life as a search for fulfilment and contentment in helping others, rather than a search for wealth. It seems unlikely that the priority for, say, every nurse or teacher in the world is to become well-off, and jobs such as these are rarely extremely well-paid.

Despite this, some would argue that those people who have families to support should always prioritise earning a high income; after all, it means securing their children’s future. Others point out that, as the job market becomes increasingly unstable across the globe, it is vital to earn more and therefore save more. However, I do not agree that a good salary should necessarily be the number one concern for everyone. Too many people become preoccupied with the next pay rise or career move, and eventually, become unhappy or even depressed, neither of which helps them to save or to provide for their family.

In summary, earning as much money as is humanly possible should not be anyone’s main concern. Granted, it arguably brings financial stability, for individuals and for their families, but it is simply not worth tolerating a lifetime of unhappiness at work purely for the money.

(291 words)

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Essay#12 | Environmental Issues https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/environmental-issues/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/environmental-issues/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/?p=6316 Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.

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How to do IELTS Writing Task 2
  • Read the instructions carefully. Decide how many parts there are to the question and underline them. Decide what your view is on the topic. (Allow between two and three minutes for this.)
  • Quickly brainstorm some ideas and write a plan. Make sure you know how many paragraphs to write and what to put in each one. Decide what will go in your conclusion. (Allow between three and four minutes for this.)
  • Write your answer, allowing up to five minutes to check it through afterwards. (Allow about 34 minutes for this.)
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

It is certainly true that environmental problems should be taken seriously in order to prevent disaster in the future. Unfortunately, however, most people do not take this threat seriously enough and this is for a number of reasons. The following essay will outline why the majority of people do not care enough about the environment.

Perhaps the main reason people do not give the environment much thought is because at the moment it does not affect their daily life. This is because, generally, they cannot see how global warming or pollution is destroying the environment. It is only when a crisis occurs, such as flooding, that people start to consider the reasons behind it. However, these are soon forgotten and the situation is once again ignored.

Another reason environmental issues are ignored is that people do not know enough about them. Although it is generally understood that recycling helps to save resources, this is perhaps the only step people take to help the situation. Most people have heard of global warming and pollution, but do not fully understand the implications of them. If they did, sure they would use their car less and try at all costs to save resources more.

Many people also believe that these environmental problems will not impact society for another 50 to 100 years. Consequently, people feel these problems can be dealt with then by future generations.

Overall, therefore, whilst there may be some people who are fully aware of the environmental problems facing the planet, the majority of the population still do not give them the attention they deserve.

(265 words)

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Essay#11 | Value of Money https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/value-of-money/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/value-of-money/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/?p=6308 Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum.

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Useful language: Expressing opinions
  • I am certain that …
  • For me it is obvious that …
  • I am convinced that …
  • It has long been my belief that …
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

It may be true that schools don’t really teach young people how to handle their finances on a grand scale, but it isn’t true that they ignore the topic altogether. The problem may be that students don’t see the relevance of what they are taught.

At primary school children learn to do mental arithmetic and simple calculations including fractions and decimals. At my school, maths problems at this level were set in a real context such as working out the cost of buying a T-shirt at 10% discount, or calculating interest when you put your pocket money in a savings account.

Unfortunately, some children do not realise how useful these things will be later in life. For instance, if you borrow money to buy a car, you need to know how to work out for yourself how much it will cost you without relying on the finance company to tell you. Similarly people should only buy things on credit if they know how much it is really costing them if they don’t pay the debt off each month.

It is possibly true that schools could try to make children understand the importance of all these areas, but children are young and cannot look into the future or predict the skills that they will need.

Ultimately, people have to make their own decisions about what money is worth, based on their earnings and lifestyle. An education system can equip us to work out what is best, but it cannot save the money for us.

(253 words)

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Essay#9 | Gap Year Before Starting University https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/essay-9/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/essay-9/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/ielts-writing-samples-task-2-essay-8-2/3576/ Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience.

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Important Tips
  • Make sure you understand the question
    Take time to read the question very carefully. Underline the parts you have to write about and ask yourself:

    • What is the main topic?
    • How many parts are there?
    • Do I need to present arguments for and against?
    • What is my opinion?
  • Introduce your essayThe introduction sets the scene for your reader. It tells them what you are going to discuss, what the issues are, and often what your position is.
  • Make your opinion on the topic clear to the readerDecide on your view and state this, either in the introduction or during the course of your essay. Keep your position clear and don’t change it.
  • Draw a logical conclusionAt the end of your essay, you need to write one or two sentences that summarise your arguments and your point of view.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience.

Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

The majority of students start their degree in the same year as finishing school or college. Some students, however, choose to take a year out before starting university. In my opinion, this is a very good idea if the time is used wisely in order to gain new skills or knowledge. In the following essay, I will discuss this idea further.

It is very important that, when a gap year is taken, the time is not wasted but used productively. It would not look very impressive to a future employer if the time was simply used to take a break. This does not mean to say that a gap year should not be enjoyed.

Many people choose to go travelling during their gap year. This can be very beneficial to the individual as it exposes them to new ideas and cultures. It can also mean that they are able to learn a new language. Other students decide to gain work experience during this year. This can be particularly useful, especially if connected to their chosen area of study. Often, students who have worked before attending university appreciate their course more, as they are able to understand the relevance of what is being taught.

Overall, therefore, as discussed in this essay, there can be several benefits to taking a gap year. It is very important, however, that this time is used wisely and not wasted. This means that the year needs to be planned carefully in advance to get the most from the experience.

(253 words)

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Essay#8 | Unemployment https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/essay-8/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/essay-8/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/ielts-writing-samples-task-2-essay-7-2/3562/ Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Tips

This task asks you to say to what extent you agree or disagree with a statement on a certain topic. You can do this in different ways. For example:

  • present objectively both sides of the argument to give a balanced view, before explaining in your conclusion which side of the argument you favour
  • agree/disagree entirely with the statement given, and produce an essay that clearly argues in favour of one side.

It is recommended that even if you entirely favour one side of the argument, you mention any opposing arguments to show the examiner you have considered your position.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet.

They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

Unemployment causes many problems for society. Individuals suffer not only economically, but also in terms of their self-respect and even health. Inevitably, when the breadwinner is unemployed, other family members become victims too. Young people without job prospects may turn to drugs or crime to escape boredom and poverty. For all these reasons, any measures which can reduce unemployment are to be welcomed.

The first priority for the job seeker is information, and here the Internet offers a unique tool. Details of job vacancies and training schemes can be accessed within minutes on a computer screen, saving time and money that would otherwise be spent visiting employment agencies or buying newspapers. In addition, the Internet can be very useful in preparing for job interviews.

Once a suitable job vacancy has been identified, it’s vital to respond quickly, and in this respect, it can be argued that a mobile phone is more convenient than a conventional phone. Since calls on a mobile can be very expensive, however, costs can easily get out of hand unless they are monitored carefully.

It has to be said that, like any tools, the Internet and the mobile phone are only as good as their user. Both need to be used effectively, and of course both are open to abuse. There is little point in making technology available, therefore, without providing basic training in using it.

In conclusion, I believe there are strong arguments for giving unemployed people access to the Internet. However, the case for providing mobile phones is less convincing, and it may be more cost-effective in the long run to invest in relevant training programmes.

(272 words)

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Essay#7 | Healthcare https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/essay-7/ https://ielts.cloud/writing/ielts-writing-task-2/discussion-essays/essay-7/#respond Mon, 07 Dec 2020 17:51:04 +0000 https://ielts.cloud/ielts-writing-samples-task-2-essay-6-2/3554/ In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Tip – Use Examples

Be careful when you use examples! It is important that you include at least two, one for each side of the argument if appropriate, but no more. Sometimes candidates feel that they can fill out the 250 words by writing lots of examples. Even if these are well written, your mark will be reduced because you will not have fully answered the question.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare.

A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare providers in the future.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.
Model answer

Advances in medical science are resulting in prolonged lifespans but there is a knock-on effect for public health services with many hospitals struggling to cope with an aging populace. Many countries enjoy the benefits of free or subsidised national public health services. However, there are some within senior health management who claim that such provision will become unsustainable, and I firmly agree that changes need to be made in order to reflect this changing reality.

Despite the notion that healthcare should be ‘free’, such care is predominantly funded by the taxpayer. To give a specific example, a recent report in my country established that almost 40% of the nation’s tax spending is distributed to healthcare and some 80% of that figure is reserved for treating the elderly. This is a disproportionate amount of money which has greatly increased the burden on the state and existing funding is no longer sufficient to meet these needs. This is turn impacts on the standard of care that can be provided as shown by numerous negative media reports about the conditions for both staff and patients. If we want quality healthcare then, clearly this financial burden needs to be alleviated.

One way to do so would be to increase the contributions made by citizens through increased taxation. Alternatively, governments could encourage those who can afford it to take up private healthcare arrangements. By switching to a private model, the well-off can afford a higher quality of care, while at the same relieving pressure on public services for those who do not have the means to go private.

One thing is for certain, an ageing population has increased the pressure on existing health provision. If we are going to maintain the standards of healthcare that we are used to, more funding needs to be found either through taxation and alternative forms of provision should be considered. Otherwise, standards will fall and people’s lives will be put at risk.

(323 words)

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